Gig!

Friday, June 12th, 2009

So, tomorrow is my first gig as poet in residence at Barracks Lane.  I feel I’ve not been as open about the process of writing as I could have been, being very happy to show the initial free-writes, but less willing to show the awkward slog of getting the stuff down, editing it, cutting out the horrific lines… So, here are some of the outtakes – the god awful bits that compromise my dignity and self-respect.

Do you smoke, he asked, running a hand through his hair
And his dogs cantered about his legs sniffing and yelping
In the simple joy that only dogs have.

At some point you must look up away
from the book lying fascinating on your lap
And notice, just notice, the profound
surface of your eye, the surface of your
skin, the surface of your lips
And the vacuity of solar light.

Oh it’s important
But I wish it were less so.

The water runs off the leaves
That hang over the balcony.
And drip!
Drip drip.
Drop!

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London writer, based on allotment in Hampstead; gently led by gardener Scarlett Cannon and Mentee of Katherine Stanton.

  1. annamaria
    June 16th, 2009

    Dear Jay,
    very brave, here is one my excruiating lines of poetry for a Kneehigh play…
    “She felt her belly womb sing”
    How bad is that? Like a fever, it got FAR worse before in got better, then those lines were buried in a secret poetry funeral.
    annamaria

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